Warning: MAJOR spoilage. As in - here is the entire plot. ONLY view this if you are interested in critiquing the storyline and don't mind if secrets are revealed before you read the story.

( Episode II - Rise of the Twin Suns )
( Episode III: The Clone War )

This is starting to actually make SENSE! Woah!


Warning! SPOILERS!!


( 10 years after the Battle of Naboo... )

1) Anakin in the Ship. (complete, see Febuary 14th, 2004)

2) Obi-Wan senses the the assasination and goes to aid. (drafted, see January 19th, 2004)

3) Panaka sends a distress message and Obi-Wan goes in pursuit of Nesstwa, telling Anakin to stay and make sure the Queen is safe. (pending)

3) Lightsaber battle: Nesstwa vs. Obi-Wan. The lightsaber battle lasts a bit and then becomes a chase, as Nesstwa flees to her ship and Obi-Wan pursues. (pending)

Depending on length and cut-off/suspence, this part may be put in the beginning of the second chapter.

4) Obi-Wan is forced to leave Naboo in order to follow Nesstwa further. Now that he knows she's a Sith, it is very high priority for him to catch her. (pending)

Alright, so adding to the Adaleia gets kicked out of the Order plot line:
EVIL SITH ENCOUNTER! (A.k.a. 'Temptation Island')

1)Adaleia gets kicked out and fights with Obi-Wan, who doesn't follow her, since he's so mad. (picture little angry Ob-Wan chibi...it's very amusing)

2) Anakin sees the fight, and sneaks out after her in an attempt to engage her in rational conversation, but she's too far ahead so he's forced to follow her at a distance.

3) Adaleia enters the club and sits at the bar. As Anakin enters, he feels a bit of a sting against the back of his neck, but figures its just part of somebody's outfit whacking him, since it's so crouded.

4) In reality, NESSTWA the EVIL stole a bit of blood, and hands it to Deur, who sits down at the bar and offers Adaleia a drink!!! Eeep! "OMG don't take it!" Sorry. Hyper.

5) Adaleia drinks the Anakinblood-boose concoction, and feeling dizzy, she stands up and goes to dance, but in a stupor she faints into the arms of *hiss-another man!* (cough) Deur.

6) Anakin sees this transpire and launches after them, prepared to fight, when Nesstwa swoops in and injects him with Adaleia's blood (retrieved when she was at the bar with Deur). He is sucessfully procured for her EVIL purposes.

7) When Anakin and Adaleia Wake up, they are both secured to seperate steel lab tables. It is very dark, and there are strange looking instruments and scientific equipment around the room. Jedi, meet the *insert dramatic theme music here* SUPER SECRET EVIL SITH LAIR!!

8)Anyway.

A bit of a scraggly timeline.
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1) Sabé, posing as the Queen, is killed during an assassination attempt by Nesstwa on Naboo. (Amidala is targeted because Sidious wants to scare out her opposition to cloning, although the attack also was ploy to draw Anakin to the Dark Side)

2) Anakin and Obi-Wan confront and duel with Nesstwa, but she escapes and Obi-Wan quickly pursues, making Anakin stay behind to watch after he Queen. ( wink )

Okay...a cookie is coming to me...and I'll probably write it tonight or maybe later today...depending. ( Anyway here goes )

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I dunno, comment and tell me if I'm crazy or not.