15 February 2004 @ 02:12 am
</b>Well, where else am I going to put the deleted scenes?</b>
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Chapter Ø )
Well, actually, I didn't write most of this....it's a LONG story involving a person who may not have existed....but to make a long story short, somebody sent me this and I edited it and re-wrote it a bit more to my liking. Not that I like it anymore. Cause I pretty much don't.
Ah well.
 
 
15 February 2004 @ 01:59 am
Well, where else am I going to put the deleted scenes?

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      As his fingers moved over the C-pad, Obi-Wan tried to concentrate on what he was doing. Correcting Tests. )

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This cookie was actually inspired from some dialogue from Kelsey, which remains esentially intact. Hooray for Kelsey....oops...I never responded to her e-mail...I'm such a jerk.
 
 
15 February 2004 @ 01:50 am
Well, where else am I going to put the deleted scenes?

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The Balcony Scene
Draft Two )
 
 
[ENGINE STATUS]: sore
[PERIPHERAL]: I have 'Billy Jean' randomly stuck in my head...
 
 
15 February 2004 @ 01:27 am
</b>Well, where else am I going to put the deleted scenes?</b>

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The Balcony Scene
Draft One )
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The reason I posted both versions of this scene is because there are some very obvious differences, particularly in the song choice and the feeling of the end. I like parts of this one more, parts of the other one less. Depending on my mood. Anyway, enjoy. Or don't. Whatever.
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